29 Mar

The Laughing Hour

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The Laughing Hour

When the Hollowbell Family Carnival appears overnight in an empty field, thirteen-year-old Lily Harper immediately senses something is wrong, especially with the clowns watching her family a little too closely. What begins as a normal afternoon of rides, games, and cotton candy turns into a nightmare when the exits vanish, the carnival lights turn red, and the clowns begin trapping families for a sinister event called The Laughing Hour. Lily manages to lead her family through the haunted Big Smile Show and escape back into the empty field, but a red balloon marked “SEE YOU NEXT YEAR” proves the carnival may not be finished with them.

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The Laughing Hour

The carnival arrived overnight.

That was the first strange thing.

On Friday, the field beyond Millbrook Road was empty except for tall grass, broken beer bottles, and a sagging wooden sign that said NO TRESPASSING.

By Saturday morning, there were Ferris wheel lights turning lazily against the gray sky, striped tents rippling in the breeze, and a row of food stands glowing like little ovens.

A banner stretched across the entrance:

WELCOME TO HOLLOWBELL FAMILY CARNIVAL
FUN FOR ALL AGES

The letters were painted bright red.

At least, Lily Harper thought it was paint.

“Can we go? Please?” her little brother Ethan begged from the back seat as they drove past.

Their dad slowed the car. “I didn’t even know this was coming to town.”

Their mom leaned forward, squinting through the windshield. “Looks cute.”

Lily, who was thirteen and had recently decided she was too old to enjoy anything her parents suggested, stared at the carnival with suspicion.

A clown stood just inside the entrance, waving.

He wore a yellow suit with blue stars, white gloves, and a round red nose. His smile was painted too wide, curling almost to his ears.

As their car passed, the clown stopped waving.

He turned his head slowly and looked directly at Lily.

His painted smile did not move.

But his real mouth beneath it opened just slightly.

Like he was whispering something.

Lily looked away.

“No,” she said.

Her dad glanced at her in the rearview mirror. “No?”

“No to all of that.”

Ethan kicked her seat. “You hate fun.”

“I like fun,” Lily said. “I hate clowns that look like they crawl out of drains.”

Their mom laughed. “It’s one afternoon. Cotton candy, games, and a few rides. We’ll leave before dark.”

That was the promise.

They would leave before dark.

By four o’clock, they were walking beneath the carnival archway, and Lily had to admit the place seemed normal enough.

Mostly.

Kids ran around with balloons. Parents carried paper trays of funnel cakes. Music jingled from speakers hidden somewhere in the tents. The Ferris wheel creaked overhead, its lights blinking in red, blue, and yellow.

Ethan was in heaven.

He won a plastic sword at the ring toss. Their dad knocked over milk bottles and won their mom a stuffed bear with one eye slightly lower than the other. Their mom bought cotton candy bigger than Ethan’s head.

Even Lily started to relax.

Then she saw the clowns again.

There were more of them now.

Not just the one at the entrance.

A tall clown in a purple coat stood by the carousel, twisting balloon animals. A short clown in green shoes crouched near the duck pond game, handing prizes to little kids. Two clowns in matching red suspenders walked through the crowd, honking horns and pretending to fall over each other.

Everyone laughed.

Everyone except Lily.

Because every time she looked at them, one of the clowns was already looking back.

Not performing.

Not smiling.

Watching.

“Mom,” Lily said quietly.

Her mom was trying to wipe powdered sugar off Ethan’s chin. “What, honey?”

“The clowns are weird.”

Her dad chuckled. “That’s kind of their job.”

“No. I mean, really weird.”

The clown in the purple coat raised one white-gloved hand and wiggled his fingers at her.

His balloon animal popped.

A little girl screamed.

The clown turned to the girl, bowed deeply, and pulled another balloon from his sleeve.

But Lily saw what fell out with it.

A tooth.

Small.

White.

Human-looking.

It hit the dirt and disappeared beneath the clown’s oversized shoe.

Lily grabbed her mom’s arm. “I want to go.”

Her mom studied her face and must have seen something there, because she stopped smiling.

“Okay,” she said. “We can head out after Ethan’s ride.”

Ethan was already climbing into a little rocket ship ride.

“One ride,” their dad said. “Then we go.”

The ride operator was a clown.

Of course he was.

He wore a faded silver costume and a tiny hat strapped beneath his chin. His makeup was cracked, revealing a grayish complexion beneath. When he checked Ethan’s seat belt, his gloved fingers lingered too long against the buckle.

“Safe and snug,” the clown said.

His voice sounded wet.

The rockets began to spin.

Ethan laughed and threw both hands up.

The sun sank lower.

The sky bruised purple.

And somewhere across the carnival, a bell rang.

Once.

Twice.

Three times.

Every clown stopped moving.

The music cut out.

The Ferris wheel lights flickered.

For one long second, the entire carnival froze.

Then the music came back.

But it was slower now.

Warped.

Like a children’s song played underwater.

Lily’s dad frowned. “That was odd.”

The rocket ride slowed, then stopped.

Ethan climbed out, still smiling.

But the clown operator bent down beside him and whispered something in his ear.

Ethan’s smile faded.

“What did he say?” Lily asked as Ethan came back.

Her little brother looked pale.

“He said we shouldn’t leave,” Ethan whispered.

Their mother stepped forward. “Excuse me?”

The clown operator tilted his head.

The tiny hat slid slightly to one side.

“We wouldn’t want the boy to miss the Laughing Hour,” he said.

Lily’s dad put a hand on Ethan’s shoulder. “We’re leaving.”

The clown’s painted grin stretched.

“That’s what they all say.”

A gust of wind pushed through the carnival.

The striped tents fluttered.

The lights buzzed.

Then every bulb in the carnival turned red.

People began moving toward the exit all at once.

At least, they tried to.

The archway was gone.

Where the entrance had been, there was now only a tall red-and-white tent Lily didn’t remember seeing before.

Painted across its front in crooked letters were the words:

THE BIG SMILE SHOW

Her mom whispered, “Where’s the gate?”

Her dad grabbed Ethan’s hand. “Stay close.”

Around them, families were beginning to panic. A man shouted for security. A woman called someone’s name over and over. A toddler cried so hard he coughed.

Then the clowns started laughing.

Not the silly carnival laugh they used for children.

This was lower.

Hungrier.

It came from behind booths, under rides, inside tents.

The tall clown in purple stepped into the midway.

Then the short clown in green.

Then the twins in red suspenders.

Then dozens more.

They emerged from places that should not have held them: beneath the duck pond, from inside the popcorn machine, out of the ticket booth window, unfolding themselves from impossible shadows.

Their faces were painted differently.

But their mouths were all the same.

Wide.

Red.

Open.

Lily’s dad backed away. “Kids, behind me.”

One of the twin clowns lifted a horn to his lips.

Honk.

The man who had been yelling for security stopped mid-shout.

His face went blank.

Then he started laughing.

So did the woman beside him.

Then another person.

Then another.

Laughter spread through the crowd like sickness.

People bent over, clutching their stomachs. Some dropped to their knees. Some laughed until tears streamed down their faces.

Then blood.

Lily covered Ethan’s ears.

“Don’t listen,” she said.

Their mom pulled them toward a game booth. “This way.”

They ran behind the row of stands, ducking between cables, crates, and grease barrels. The red lights pulsed overhead. The laughter followed them, rising and falling like waves.

Behind them, Lily heard the slap of oversized shoes.

Fast.

Too fast.

They rounded a corner and nearly crashed into a clown standing upside down on his hands.

His head twisted around to face them.

“Leaving so soon?” he asked.

Lily’s dad grabbed a metal pole from the ground and swung it.

The clown bent backward with a rubbery crack, avoiding the blow. Then he snapped upright, grinning.

Their dad swung again.

This time, the pole hit the clown’s head.

It made a hollow sound.

Like striking a pumpkin.

The clown stumbled.

Black liquid ran from his nose.

“Go!” Dad shouted.

They ran.

The carnival seemed bigger now. The midway stretched longer than it had before. Rides towered above them at wrong angles. The carousel horses turned their wooden heads as the family passed, their painted eyes wet and alive.

Ethan sobbed. “I want to go home.”

“I know,” their mom said, her voice breaking. “I know, baby.”

They reached the Ferris wheel.

It was no longer turning.

People sat trapped in the cars high above, laughing and screaming at the same time.

At the base of the wheel stood the entrance clown, the first one Lily had seen from the car.

Yellow suit.

Blue stars.

Red nose.

He held a bundle of balloons.

Each balloon had a face pressed against the inside.

The clown bowed.

“Harper family,” he said.

Their dad went still. “How do you know our name?”

The clown’s eyes flicked to Lily.

“We know all the families who come for fun.”

His voice changed on the last word.

Fun became something sharp.

Something old.

The clown released one balloon.

It floated toward Ethan.

Inside the rubbery surface, a child’s face pushed outward, mouth open in silent warning.

Ethan screamed and slapped it away.

The balloon burst.

A cold wind rushed out, carrying a tiny voice.

“Run.”

Lily did.

She grabbed Ethan and bolted toward the red tent.

“The Big Smile Show?” her mom yelled. “Why are we going there?”

“Because everything else is chasing us!” Lily shouted.

It wasn’t a good reason.

It was just the only one she had.

They ducked inside the tent.

The air changed instantly.

Outside, the carnival smelled like popcorn, sugar, and oil.

Inside, it smelled like dust, old pennies, and something rotting beneath perfume.

Rows of empty wooden chairs surrounded a small circular stage.

A spotlight clicked on.

In the center of the stage sat a single red chair.

Above it hung a sign:

ONE FAMILY VOLUNTEER NEEDED

The tent flap snapped shut behind them.

Their dad ran to it and tried to force it open.

It wouldn’t budge.

A voice echoed through the tent.

“Ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls…”

The spotlight flickered.

A clown appeared onstage.

Not stepping out from behind a curtain.

Just there.

He was taller than the others, thin as a pole, dressed in a black-and-white suit with ruffles at the neck. His face was painted white, but his mouth was unpainted.

Because it didn’t need paint.

It was already too wide.

“Welcome,” he said, “to the Laughing Hour.”

Lily’s mom held Ethan so tightly that he whimpered.

The tall clown spread his arms.

“You came for family fun.”

The empty chairs creaked.

Something invisible sat down in them.

One chair.

Then another.

Then another.

The tent filled with the sound of unseen bodies settling in to watch.

“So,” the clown said, “let us make your family funny.”

Lily’s dad stepped forward. “Let us out.”

The clown looked delighted. “A brave daddy.”

The chairs applauded.

No hands were visible.

Only the sound.

Clap. Clap. Clap.

The clown pointed at the red chair onstage.

“Sit.”

“No,” Dad said.

The clown’s smile vanished.

The tent darkened.

Outside, hundreds of clowns began chanting.

“Sit. Sit. Sit. Sit.”

Ethan clung to Lily. “Make it stop.”

Their dad looked back at them.

In that moment, Lily knew what he was going to do.

“Dad, don’t.”

He smiled at her, but his eyes were wet.

“It’s okay, kiddo.”

He climbed onto the stage and sat in the red chair.

Metal straps shot out from the sides and locked around his wrists and ankles.

Their mom screamed and ran toward him, but an invisible force threw her backward into the dirt.

The tall clown leaned over Lily’s father.

“What makes a family laugh?” he asked.

Lily’s dad strained against the straps. “You’re not real.”

The clown giggled.

The sound made Lily’s teeth ache.

“Wrong answer.”

He reached into his sleeve and pulled out a long silver needle.

“No!” Lily screamed.

The clown placed the tip at the corner of her father’s mouth.

Then Lily saw it.

Behind the stage curtain, half-hidden in shadow, was a door.

Not a tent flap.

A real door.

Wooden.

Old.

With an exit sign above it.

And on the floor beside her shoe was the metal pole her dad had dropped earlier.

Lily picked it up.

The tall clown raised the needle.

“Smile,” he whispered.

Lily swung the pole into the spotlight.

The bulb exploded.

Darkness swallowed the tent.

Her dad shouted.

The clown shrieked, but now he sounded less like a monster and more like something furious that had been interrupted.

Lily grabbed Ethan with one hand and her mom with the other.

“Curtain!” she yelled.

They ran blind.

Something clawed at Lily’s hair. Another hand grabbed her hoodie. Ethan bit someone or something, and it howled.

They crashed through the curtain.

The wooden door stood ahead.

Lily yanked it open.

Cold night air hit her face.

Real night air.

They stumbled out into the empty field beyond Millbrook Road.

No carnival.

No tents.

No Ferris wheel.

Just tall grass beneath the moon.

Behind them, her dad fell through the doorway, gasping.

The door slammed shut.

Then it vanished.

For a moment, the four of them just lay in the grass, breathing hard.

Across the field, their car sat parked by the road.

The carnival was gone.

The only thing left behind was a single red balloon tied to the antenna.

Ethan started crying again.

Their mom carried him to the car.

Their dad kept touching the corners of his mouth, as if making sure they were still normal.

Lily stared at the balloon.

It bobbed gently in the wind.

Written on it in black marker were four words:

SEE YOU NEXT YEAR

Nobody spoke on the drive home.

Not when they passed the empty field.

Not when they reached their street.

Not when they locked every door in the house.

For three nights, Lily did not sleep.

On the fourth night, she woke to soft music drifting through her bedroom window.

Calliope music.

Bright.

Tinny.

Far away.

She sat up slowly.

Outside, beyond the glass, something red floated in the dark.

A balloon.

Then another.

Then ten more.

They rose from the yard like bubbles from deep water.

And beneath her window, standing in the flower bed, was the clown in the yellow suit.

He looked up at her.

His painted smile was gone.

Underneath it was something worse.

A real one.

He lifted one white-gloved finger and tapped the glass.

Once.

Twice.

Three times.

Then he whispered through the window.

“The show isn’t over, Lily.”

From somewhere inside her closet, Ethan began to laugh.

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17 Mar

The Patient in the Walls

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The Patient in the Walls

Five teenagers dare each other to spend an hour inside the abandoned house on Mercy Lane, a place tied to the burned ruins of an old treatment center. Once inside, they hear whispers coming from the walls and meet Daniel, a terrified-looking patient who claims he was trapped there.

But Daniel is not trying to help them escape. He is part of the house’s curse, luring victims to the nurse-like entity living inside the walls. As the group is picked off one by one, Emma and Kayla barely escape through a hidden tunnel while the house burns behind them.

The horror follows them home, ending with Emma hearing the same haunting presence inside her bedroom wall.

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Everyone in Briar County knew about the house at the end of Mercy Lane.

It sat alone beyond the tree line, past the rusted gate and the cracked stone angels, where the road narrowed into a tunnel of dead branches. The house had been abandoned since the 1970s, when the Mercy Lane Treatment Center burned down on the hill behind it.

The treatment center was gone now, swallowed by weeds and rumors.

But the house remained.

Three stories tall. Black windows. Porch sagging like a broken jaw.

And every October, someone dared someone else to go inside.

That year, it was Mason’s idea.

“Midnight,” he said, leaning against his truck in the school parking lot. “We stay one hour. Basement to attic. Whoever bails owes everyone fifty bucks.”

“Nope,” said Emma immediately.

“You scared?” Mason grinned.

“Yes,” Emma said. “That’s what intelligent people call pattern recognition.”

Tyler laughed. Kayla rolled her eyes. Noah, who had been quiet, glanced toward the distant woods past the football field.

“My brother said cops found stuff there last month,” Noah said.

Mason perked up. “What kind of stuff?”

“Blankets. Canned food. Like someone had been living inside.”

“That makes it better,” Tyler said. “Now it’s a documentary.”

Emma folded her arms. “That makes it worse.”

But by 11:56 that night, all five of them were standing outside the iron gate at Mercy Lane with flashlights, backpacks, and the false confidence that only teenagers seem able to manufacture.

The gate opened with a long, animal groan.

“Classic,” Tyler whispered.

They walked up the gravel drive. The house rose ahead of them, darker than the sky behind it.

Kayla lifted her phone to take a picture.

The screen showed the porch.

The door.

The second-floor windows.

And in one of them, just for a second, the pale shape of a face.

Kayla dropped the phone.

“What?” Mason asked.

She stared up at the window.

Nothing.

“Somebody’s in there,” she whispered.

Mason smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “Good.”

The front door was already open.

Inside, the air was wet and cold. Wallpaper hung in strips. The floorboards were soft under their shoes. Their flashlights revealed an overturned piano in the front room, family portraits with the faces scratched out, and a staircase that climbed into darkness.

Then they heard the first sound.

A whisper.

Not from upstairs.

Not from the hall.

From inside the walls.

“Don’t let him out.”

Everyone froze.

Tyler forced a laugh. “Okay. Which one of you did that?”

No one answered.

The whisper came again, closer this time.

“Don’t let him out.”

Emma’s hand found Kayla’s sleeve. “We’re leaving.”

Mason swallowed. “It’s probably pipes.”

“There are no working pipes,” Noah said.

A thump came from above them.

Then another.

Slow.

Heavy.

Like someone dragging one bad foot across the ceiling.

Mason aimed his flashlight up the staircase. “Hello?”

The dragging stopped.

Then something upstairs ran.

Fast.

The ceiling shook as footsteps thundered across the second floor and stopped directly above them.

Dust drifted down.

Kayla started crying silently.

Mason backed toward the door. “Okay. Joke’s over.”

The front door slammed shut.

Every flashlight flickered at once.

In the sudden dark, someone breathed near Emma’s ear.

“Not that way.”

She screamed.

The lights snapped back on.

A man stood at the end of the hallway.

He was barefoot, wearing torn gray hospital pants and a stained white shirt. His hair hung in strings around his face. One wrist was wrapped in a strip of cloth, and his eyes were wide with terror.

Not anger.

Not madness.

Terror.

No one moved.

The man raised one shaking finger to his lips.

“Quiet,” he whispered. “It hears the loud ones first.”

Mason grabbed Tyler’s arm. “Run.”

“No,” the man hissed.

Too late.

Tyler bolted for the front door and yanked at the handle.

It would not move.

Behind the wallpaper, something scratched.

A long, slow drag.

Like fingernails under the surface.

The man’s face collapsed in horror. “You woke her.”

The wall beside Tyler bulged outward.

For one impossible second, it looked soft. Like skin pressing from the other side.

Then the wallpaper split.

A gray hand shot out, grabbed Tyler by the backpack, and pulled him backward into the wall.

He didn’t even have time to scream properly.

One second, he was there.

Next, there was only torn wallpaper, a dangling flashlight, and the wet sound of chewing from inside the plaster.

Kayla shrieked.

The barefoot man lunged forward and clamped a hand over her mouth.

“Do you want to die too?” he whispered.

Mason was pale now. All his bravery had drained out of him.

“What are you?” Emma asked the man.

He looked at her, eyes shining.

“My name is Daniel,” he said. “I was a patient at Mercy Lane. They told everyone I escaped.”

Noah whispered, “Did you?”

Daniel shook his head slowly.

“They locked me in here.”

The house groaned around them.

A woman’s voice floated down the stairs, sweet and rotten.

“Daaaaaaniel.”

Daniel flinched so hard his shoulder hit the wall.

Emma felt something cold move through the room, not air exactly, but the feeling of being remembered by something dead.

Daniel pointed toward the back hall. “Basement. There’s a tunnel under the old treatment center. It’s the only way out.”

“What about Tyler?” Kayla sobbed.

Daniel didn’t answer.

That was answer enough.

They followed him through the hall as the house awakened.

Doors opened by themselves. Portraits turned their scratched-out faces toward them. From upstairs came soft humming, the kind a mother might use to soothe a child.

Except beneath it were screams.

Hundreds of them.

They reached the kitchen. Mold covered the cabinets. The refrigerator door hung open, though no electricity had run to the house in decades.

On the refrigerator, written in blackened fingerprints, were the words:

DANIEL LIED

Mason stopped. “What does that mean?”

Daniel stared at the words, trembling.

“It means she’s trying to separate us.”

The basement door stood in the corner.

Locked.

Daniel pulled a key from beneath his shirt, hanging from a string around his neck.

That was when Noah noticed the hospital bracelet still around Daniel’s wrist.

It wasn’t old.

The plastic was clean.

The printed date was from three days ago.

Noah took a step back. “You said you were locked here years ago.”

Daniel turned.

For the first time, his expression changed.

Not fear.

Something hollow.

“I said they told everyone I escaped.”

The kitchen lights flickered on.

Every bulb burned red.

Kayla whispered, “Mason…”

Behind Daniel, in the dark reflection of the kitchen window, a woman stood with her hands on his shoulders.

She was tall and thin, dressed in a nurse’s uniform burned black at the edges. Her face was hidden by a veil of wet hair.

Daniel smiled.

“She doesn’t like loud ones,” he said softly. “But she loves brave ones.”

Mason swung his flashlight at Daniel’s head.

The nurse moved first.

Her arm stretched too long, bending where no arm should bend, and she caught Mason by the throat. His feet kicked above the floor.

Emma grabbed Kayla and ran.

Noah followed.

Behind them, Mason made one choking sound.

Then silence.

They crashed into the dining room, where the table was set for dinner. Five plates. Five chairs. Five cups filled with dark water.

Tyler sat in one chair.

Or what was left of him.

Kayla stumbled, and Emma nearly fell, pulling her up.

The wall behind them split open.

Daniel stepped through it as if it were a curtain.

“You weren’t supposed to come here,” he said. “But she gets lonely.”

Noah picked up a rusted fireplace poker and stood between Daniel and the girls.

Daniel tilted his head. “That won’t help.”

“No,” Noah said, voice shaking. “But it’ll feel good.”

He swung.

The poker passed through Daniel like smoke.

Daniel laughed.

That was when Emma understood.

Daniel had not escaped from the hospital.

Daniel had died there.

Maybe he had been a patient. Maybe he had been a prisoner. Maybe he had been the first victim of the thing in the house.

But he was not trying to leave.

He was bringing others in.

Emma grabbed a candle from the table and hurled it at the curtains.

The old fabric caught instantly.

Fire climbed toward the ceiling.

Daniel screamed.

Not in pain.

In panic.

The nurse shrieked from inside every wall at once.

The house began to shake.

“Run!” Emma shouted.

They sprinted back toward the kitchen. The basement door was open now, the lock hanging broken. Stairs descended into blackness.

Kayla went first.

Then Noah.

Emma started down after them, but something grabbed her ankle.

Daniel crouched behind her, his face split by a grin too wide for his skull.

“You can’t burn a memory,” he whispered.

Emma kicked him in the mouth.

His jaw cracked sideways.

She fell down the stairs and landed hard on the basement floor.

Noah pulled her up.

The basement was full of beds.

Hospital beds.

Dozens of them.

Restraints hanging from the sides.

Names scratched into the walls.

At the far end, a tunnel sloped downward.

Behind them, the stairs burned.

From the smoke above, the nurse crawled onto the ceiling, moving like a spider, hair dangling beneath her.

Kayla sobbed, “Please, please, please…”

They ran into the tunnel.

The earth walls were wet. Pipes overhead dripped black water. Behind them came Daniel’s voice, echoing in the dark.

“Emma.”

She didn’t stop.

“Kayla.”

Kayla covered her ears.

“Noah.”

Noah looked back.

That was his mistake.

A hand burst from the dirt wall and pulled him sideways up to his shoulder. He screamed as the tunnel swallowed him.

Emma and Kayla grabbed his arms.

For a moment, they held him.

Then Noah stopped screaming.

His eyes went glassy.

He whispered, “Don’t let him out.”

And the wall took him.

Emma dragged Kayla forward.

The tunnel climbed.

Ahead, moonlight.

They burst out through a drainage ditch behind the ruins of Mercy Lane Treatment Center. Cold air hit their faces. The house burned below the hill, flames licking through the roof, black smoke rising into the stars.

Sirens wailed in the distance.

Emma and Kayla didn’t speak until the police arrived.

They told them about Mason.

Tyler.

Noah.

Daniel.

The officers searched until dawn.

They found no bodies.

No tunnel.

No hospital beds.

By morning, the house at the end of Mercy Lane was nothing but ash.

Two weeks later, Emma woke to tapping at her bedroom window.

Tap.

Tap.

Tap.

She opened her eyes.

Her room was on the second floor.

Outside the glass, Noah stood, muddy and pale, smiling with lips that did not move.

Behind him, Mason and Tyler waited in the dark.

And between them stood Daniel.

He lifted one finger to his lips.

Quiet.

Then Emma heard it.

From inside her bedroom wall.

A woman is humming.

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